Sunday, May 31, 2009

"unhone poocha bhi nahin...humne bataya bhi nahin "!!

mood of the character: the lover pays much selflessly ! gets nothing in return ! compromisingly and heavy heartedly accepts the loss..realizing all great lovers to be loosers,but stii has failed to be recognized at the other side ..Has realized this supidity N shares it with all in a simple –honest way ! Use of simple routional examples adds a sense of innocence and flow to it…Not a very standard work though ,,I lik its casual ,easy style ! hope u like it too !

Ek din yun hi….  
Bas aise hi …
  Baithe – bithaye…

Socha kuch revise karein…
Free hee sahi apne doston ko advice karein…
  Taaki wo bhi soch samajh kar hee sacrifice karein..
 
Kuch Haal na ho hamare jaisa..  
Jikra ho jiska fasane jaisa..

Humein toh Ek Ajib ittefaq ne fasa daala…
  Khoke jisme Humne toh sab gawa daala..  
Bass Kuch usulon ne marwa daala…

Aur Aap hee mile hain batane ko…  
Warna …  
unhone pucha bhi nahin…
khairrr humne bataya bhi nahin..  

Chaliye aapki hee khatir !!

hum aashiqui pe gaur farmaein..
Is dil-e-zazbaat pe zara haath aazmaein....

Chalo yaaron!! Tumhe hee majra suna daalein…
  Ishq ki aag mein thoda ghee jokh daalein…
  Sulag rahi hai kab se ..
Ab hawa toh dey hee daalein….
Mila hai aaj ek mauka jo…  
Gussey ka izhaar kar hee daalein..  

Uthao zara kitaab toh…  
Yaad jo aaye sabak woh !!  
“Dil diya dard liya…”
exchange offer tha kuch aisa hee…
laga tha deal mey kuch paisa bhi !
liya na humne discount koi…
dekhi na humne expiry koi…

par huzoor syllabus ne jo bura haal kiya…
humein toh extra load ne behaal kiya…
Bas sochte- sochte samay nikal gaya..  

socha aaj padhenge..
fir socha kal padhenge..
aur fir socha kab padhenge ?
 
Tension huyi toh laga….
Kaise bhi karke ye dard bhul jaayein…
Terrace pe jaake cigarette pee aayein !!
Ya fir Emotion pe comedy try kar lein !  
Kuch nahin toh jaake tom n jerry hee dekh lein !!
inhi ki tarah kuch hum bhi …
  Fights n craps se hi sahi ..
apne bhi episode ko stretch kar lein !!
 
par aakhir ye sab tha kya ?
wah ! ! hudd hain hum bhi yaar !!  
fokat mein expiry date ki warranty badhane chale they!!
na jane kis court mein shikayat karane nikle they !!  
nuksaan karke hum khud ka.!!
logon ko sorry bolne chale they !  

aur ab jab progress report mili hai haath mein !!
soch rahe hain !
wo haal lenge zaroor…
  lekin aaj bhi !!

unhone pucha hee nahin…
humne bataya bhi nahin..  

khade rahe ghanton waiting list mein…
kabhi dopahar kabhi sham ki shift mein..
kitne paise jhok diye…
kitne aasoon rok liye..
kya karte hisaab hum…
  kisko padhate kitaab hum…

Jab ..  
unhone pucha hee nahin !!
haan ! bas isiliye humne bataya bhi nahin !!

9 comments:

  1. hi accha rhyme kar leti ho.... keep it up

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  2. ok...
    the other poems are even more rhymed...
    By d way I fail to recognise you...u are ?

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  3. no no....we dont know each other....I was just reading your blog....and found it interesting....So i wrote the comment....

    My name is Amar....

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  4. good rhythm n rhyme,...
    ab to aapke fan hain hum!!!

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  5. rhyme is good...
    keep it up...

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  6. yar sabko rhyme he pasand aa ri ...anyway thanks for reading ma blog
    :)
    ur site seems to be cool..hv a nice tym :)

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  7. n yes ...i really like the helmet concept ! sahi hai yaar !

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  8. its really gr8..m being ur fan

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